Peer feedback.

Once I had created my final advertisement I showed it to my peers and received some feedback, this is what I learnt from the feed back: "I like the idea of the fast cutting to the beat of the music although it isn't perfectly in time it would look good if it was, I also like the use of scenery within the advert." "I like the variety of shots of the different dancers and routines, there is a good variety of angles but I feel the advert is lacking in close up shots." "The clips showing the equipment and studio portrayed the school and its resources very well, to improve maybe you could add in a variety of dances in different spaces." From this I was able to break it down into WWW and EBI. WWW: The scenery and shots of studio/ equipment at school, the fast cutting and the variety of shots. EBI: If the cutting to the beat was perfectly in time, show some different dance spaces, use more close up shots.